Kiona RedHawk

    Powerful Lady Moon

    Wednesday, March 19, 2008, 01:00 PM [General]

     

    The Moon holds power as it sways away

    She chooses her will to hold in thine eyes

    And thus your cruelty holds powerful ways

    As you sing that sweet tearful lullaby.

    My Lady, I tell thee what I do see,

    Of the way the Moon takes hold of thine heart

    And does make thee as its-self against me

    And so has driven you to play apart.

    Like the Moon holds sway, thee hast hold me too

    Like the Moon turns round, to me thy back turned

    You threw my love, as the Dark moon will do

    Your many faces cause my blood to burn

    You have skill of making many a boon

    And thus you will remain, my mistress moon

    This be a sonnet written in Shakespeares style that I writ for my Shakespeare class. If you know anything bout his sonnets, he refers much to the Dark Lady. This sonnet is to compare his Lady with that of the Moon. I hope it fares well for thee.

    4 (1 Ratings)

    Milady, of pen you have more than proven thy mastery. 'Tis a skill that I must stand in awe of, for it standeth far above any that a humble squire could hope to achieve. Th' moon, the ever-changing, many-fac'd moon, hath inspir'd more poets than I can count, and ye have heeded the call and joined thier ranks. Bear thyself with pride, milady- thou art an artist, pure and simple. The lad that has your arm is fortunate indeed.

    Be ye well, fair maid.

    Squre Reynald

    Squire Reynald
    March 19, 2008
    01:12 PM CST

    Merrily we roll-along, roll-along,roll-along, yea, merrily do we trip along the forest path and into sundry adventures.

    Sir Mikel
    March 19, 2008
    02:39 PM CST